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bulletOutline/structure:  Perhaps the writer has created enough of an outline to focus the writer's thinking. From it, the writer can clearly state in a few words what the profile is about, and can identify such elements as impact, complication, resolution, motivation, and transformation ... and where they will fall in the story. From this outline comes the thesis.
bulletFocus: The writer has found a profile subject who exhibits a  dominant characteristic or pattern of behavior that may be central to the subject's conflict, motivation, or impact. That ``defining'' characteristic, behavior, or trait is used to carry the reader through the profile. It is echoed throughout.
bulletContext/perspective: Is it clear how my subject is different than other subjects who may be similarly situated? Is it clear also how my subject is the same as others similarly situated? Have I captured my subject against a backdrop or environment that is appropriate and relevant to the meaning of this story?
bulletImpact: The writer finds a profile subject having a significant effect or influence on an individual, a group or a community. The writer includes enough context/perspective to show why that impact is significant. The writer shows (not tells) the reader this impact and helps the reader understand how others are affected.
bullet Complication/Resolution: The central character faces a problem or obstacle basic to most humans and it's particularly significant for this particular character. The writer lays out the complication and traces what steps the character takes to resolve the problem.
bulletAction: The writer's focus is on what the character does, how the character acts, not necessarily on what the character says, or on what the character thinks. The writer shows the reader an event and how the character responds to the event. Through this action, the writer can show his character's motivation and emotions ... and can evoke emotion from the reader. The writer is constantly assessing this action against this question: what does it mean?
bulletMotivation: The writer explores why the subject acts, feels, or thinks as he/she does. Who or what is an influence? What physiological or psychological need is the subject looking to meet? What is at work that satisfies the subject ... and why? Looks at: what does he/she value? The writer asks and answers: how will I portray how my subject understands himself/herself.
bullet Change/transformation/insight: The writer is sensitive to those flashpoints just before or just after the character resolves a conflict ... flashpoints that suggest some growth, some learning, some change, some new insight on the part of the character.
bulletTiming: There is a reason the subject is profiled at a specific point in time. Perhaps the writer has caught the subject at some watershed in his/her life. Or the subject is at a crossroads in their personal or professional life and is facing a difficult choice or decision. Or there is some significant conflict or tension the subject is struggling to resolve.
bullet Authenticity/Accessibility: The writer's behind-the-scenes access allows the profile subject to be caught in everyday situations and relationships with others that reveal much about the subject's defining character, impact and/or motivation. This same access provides the writer with a wider range of sources as they interact with the subject. Anecdotes/vignettes/dialogue provide the reader with an unfettered view of the subject's action, thoughts, feelings, vulnerabilities.
bulletForeshadowing: The writer is sensitive to planting key information, clues and concepts at the beginning of the piece ... elements that are relevant to the character's behavior/motivation/complication ... which the writer will return to later in the piece.
bulletForecast: The profile not only looks back but peers into the future. The writer explores what lies ahead for the subject, what possibilities exist.