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Essay Due Dates: Sept. 12
Draft Due: Sept. 5
THE ASSIGNMENT
Write an essay about a significant event in your life. Select an event, focusing the essay on telling something about you. The event may be one that, for example, influenced you in a special way, revealed a characteristic of your personality you suddenly recognized, or challenged your values or beliefs. Tell your story dramatically and vividly, giving a clear indication of its autobiographical significance. The essay should be just the length it takes to dramatically and vividly tell it and reflect upon it. Use one inch margin on all sides of the page and standard 12 pt font.
Important !!!
Save all pre-writing and rough drafts. You will need to hand in these along with your evaluation sheet and final draft, in a folder
Purpose and Audience
Your audience for this essay is your instructor and classmates. In this essay, your audience will want to know a little about you so that you may inform and/or entertain them with something about the world or life you see. Overall, your essay should reveal your understanding of the significance of the event.
Your essay should consist of the following basic features.
1) A well-told story : An essay about a remembered event should tell an interesting story. The author must shape the experience into a story that is entertaining and memorable. And the story must be put into a plot that consists of beginning, conflict, rising action, climax, and ending. The main technique is specific narrative action with its action verb and tense markers.
2) A vivid presentation of significant key people and scenes: Please re-create the scene with vivid language and specific details, and leave readers with a dominant impression. Use specific objects with real names. Use dialogue if necessary.
3) An indication of the event's significance: Show the important scenes and people from the writer's point of view. Tell how the writer feels and thinks of them as s/he recalls the experience. Explain something about the event's importance and meaning.
Things to remember:
Start early and revise frequently. I am here to help you in the process of your writing. Feel free to call me or e-mail me, or to meet with a tutor at the writing center. Enjoy the assignment !!
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Suggestions for Prewriting
OBSERVING AND DESCRIBING WITH DETAILS
Categories can be helpful for finding ideas you can include in a descriptive piece of writing. the categories listed below may or may not be useful for your topic. They are intended to help you think about your topic for different perspectives. If they are not helpful for a particular topic, develop some categories of your own which you find helpful.
For each category you should supply single word, full sentence, phrase, or clause responses. Try to be specific, concrete, and picturesque as you list associations; for example, alter texture don't simply put "soft." Instead, name something soft -- suede, a kitten, baby hair.
Try to find a good response for each of the categories suggested and see if you can even add more to the list. Use your experience, imagination, and sense of humor. Experiment a bit with the categories and samples below.
Five senses: Color, smell, taste, feeling, and sound. Texture, object, animal, food, beverage, clothing, place, flower, weather, temperature, atmosphere, country, city, location, transportation, music, decor, literary work, quotation, person, attitude, relationship, purpose, destination, destiny, sports games, travel, cyber space, love and hate, and many more.
Sample Organization
Setting Goals: Set goals for yourself which deal with the story as a whole, for example, maintaining suspense or creating a dominant impression. The context of the event (beginning, suspense, climax, and ending or denouement) needs to be designed before drafting. Organize your essay chronologically or with flashback techniques. In the plot of your story, you should describe two things: One that is going around you in reality and the other that is going on inside your mind, for example, emotional fluctuation.
The Beginning
Arouse the readers' curiosity or interest in the opening sentences, for example, with surprising announcement.
Tell a few things about yourself.
Do something unusual (with a funny dialogue).
Tell the importance or meaning of the event from your perspective and its impact on you.
Tell what you have learned from the event and how important it is to you.
The Story
The main story must be narrated from your perspectives.
Details must be connected to the thesis or main ideas.
The story should climb up to the climax from the gradual suspense.
To make the narrative more interesting, choose one among chronological, flashback, or flashforward orders for narrative structure.
Use descriptive details to dramatize the story.
Use specific narrative actions to propel the narrative forward.
Use dialogue if it intensifies the drama of the story.
Build the suspense leading to the climax.
Build the climax with trepidation or eagerness.
The Ending
Conclude with some reflections on the meaning of the experience.Contrast your remembered and current feelings and thoughts.
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