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Features of PROFILE/ OBSERVATIONAL WRITING

 

The writer clearly identifies the subject of the paper and places it in a specific time and place (context). The context does not dominate the essay. The writer firmly establishes him/herself as an eye witness, not an active participant. There is a sense of discovery, maturity and thoughtfulness which distinguishes the essay. Through use of concrete details, the writer allows the reader to "see" the scene and subject clearly, to recognize its meaning and impact on the writer.

Presentational strategies  include (but don't exclude other techniques):

bullet showing styled detailed descriptions of people, scenery, etc.
bulletdialogue or monologue
bullet shifting perspective
bulleta clear point of view/strong impression
bulletspecific anecdotes/activities
bulleta process description (how something happens)

Writers of observational/profile essays relate their scenes as if they were cameras, zooming in for a close up and then panning back for a long shot. The writer uses whatever narrative strategies are appropriate to bring to the reader the same sense of discovery, emotion or purpose the writer felt in witnessing the scene described.